Poetry Challenge for Class VI I wish I could ------------------------ Add 2 interesting stanzas to this prompt. Last submission date is 20/02/14. Good Luck
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leah
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hello my name is leah i am from 4j australia i wish i could be in vinceable
Hello my name is Liam,I am from 4J Mrs Joyce's Class in Australia
I wish I could Teleport, Never die, Breath underwater in the solar system & Land, run at the speed of light & Have The bigest choclete bar in the solar system.
Hello my name is Holly, Iam from 4j Mrs joyces class in australia. I wish I could fly to neptune. I wish I could go to Papau New Guinea. I wish I could be a tennis star.
Hello my name is Liam,I am from 4J Mrs Joyce's Class in Australia
I wish I could Teleport, Never die, Breath underwater in the solar system & Land, run at the speed of light & Have The bigest choclete bar in the solar system.
It had big red eyes . It was staring lizzie after some while the mummy dissapered and lizzzie fall down.We took her to our tent she couldn't see any thing every thing was black like smoke.when luke searched on the web it was a course that people did 3,000 years ago. It would cut the mens/womens heart in halve.The men would die slowly slowly but they coudn't lose lizzie.So they had to find the person who made the mummy do it.But the the question was why did happen only to lizzie why not to patrick and luke.They decided to go to the pyramid at night so nobody could see them sneaking in the pyramid.It was night midnight they went in the pyramid they saw some foot steps they followed them it led them in a room in which they heard two people talking when they saw them the y were noone else but Dr augustus and dr carlos they video taped then they said them to un course lizzie while they will deleate the the video they un coursed the lizzie but while the tiger team showed the video to police and go t them arrested.
Hello Everyone, I hope you like my classes posts on your blog they loved commenting. With this being their first ever international blogging I keep their writing simple, just to tell you what they wished for. I have ,oeved reading your great writing. Looking to sharing more ideas. Kind regards Mrs Joyce
hello my name is hanzala hameed karachi pakistan 6-j i wish i could be a pilot and fly my plane higher and higher over the mountains plains and seas my plane would go faster and faster i wish i could conquer this world and move around sooner and sooner i know i should work hard to achieve the goal quicker and quicker
28 comments:
hello my name is leah i am from 4j australia i wish i could be in vinceable
Hello my name is Braiden.
I am from 4J Mrs Joyces classroom in Australia.
I wish I could...
-Never die.
-Get whatever I ask for.
Hallo my name is Kane,
I am from 4J Mrs Joyce's class in Australia.
I wish I could have unlimited wishs of every think.
Hello my name is Emily.I am in mrs Joyce's grade.I wish I could be invisable and also could fly.
Hello,my name is Emmi,I am 8 years old.I am from Mrs.Joyce's grade.I love been your blog!I wish i could be invisable.I wish i could fly.
Helloo my name is harry,
i am from 4j mrs joyces class
in australia.
i wish i could have more wishes and to live forever
Hello my name is Charli,I am from 4J Mrs Joyce's class in Australia. I wish I could stay young and I wish I could be a vampire.
hello my name is James i am from 4j mes joyce's class in Australia.
i wish i could live for ever and have mindcontrol and fly.
Hello my name is alex,
I am from 4J Mrs Joyces class in Australia.I wish I could fly and be a teacher like my mum she works at this school.
Hello my name is Liam,I am from
4J Mrs Joyce's Class in Australia
I wish I could Teleport, Never die, Breath underwater in the solar system & Land, run at the speed of light & Have The bigest choclete bar in the solar system.
Hello my name is Holly,
Iam from 4j Mrs joyces class in
australia.
I wish I could fly to neptune.
I wish I could go to Papau New Guinea.
I wish I could be a tennis star.
Hello my name is Kaiden,
I am from 4J mrs joices class in Australia.I wish i could stay as a bit alder then a teenager and live for ever.
From Kaiden.
Hello my name is Liam,I am from
4J Mrs Joyce's Class in Australia
I wish I could Teleport, Never die, Breath underwater in the solar system & Land, run at the speed of light & Have The bigest choclete bar in the solar system.
hello my name is abbie iam from mrs joyces class in australia i wish i could be magic
Hello my name Max,I am from 4j mrs joyc'es class in australia I wish I could fli I wish I could go to lego lend
hello my name is Cara I am from 4J Mrs joyce class in Austrailia and i wish I could fly and I wish I was rich
Hi my name is Em
I am from 4J Mrs Joyce's class in
Australia.
I wish I could be a BMX bike racer.
I wish I could be a rock star.
Hi my name Is Jenifer I am from 4j Mrs Joycs's class in Australia. I wish I could fly and I wish I could be a telorporter.
I wish i could hold you in my arms
Just to let you know that i care
I wish i could stand beside you
Just to let you know ill be there
I wish i could write you a song
That would say everything you need to hear
I wish i could uncloud your mind
so you could see everything so clear.
made by SUFIYAN NADEEM & AYAN ALI KHAN VI-F
I wish i could stand beside you
Just to let you know ill be there
I wish i could write you a song
That would say everything you need to hear
I wish i could uncloud your mind
so you could see everything so clear.
Made by:Sufiyan Nadeem & Ayan Ali Khan VI-F Primary 1 PECHS
It had big red eyes . It was staring lizzie after some while the mummy dissapered and lizzzie fall down.We took her to our tent she couldn't see any thing every thing was black like smoke.when luke searched on the web it was a course that people did 3,000 years ago. It would cut the mens/womens heart in halve.The men would die slowly slowly but they coudn't lose lizzie.So they had to find the person who made the mummy do it.But the the question was why did happen only to lizzie why not to patrick and luke.They decided to go to the pyramid at night so nobody could see them sneaking in the pyramid.It was night midnight they went in the pyramid they saw some foot steps they followed them it led them in a room in which they heard two people talking when they saw them the y were noone else but Dr augustus and dr carlos they video taped then they said them to un course lizzie while they will deleate the the video they un coursed the lizzie but while the tiger team showed the video to police and go t them arrested.
Hello Everyone,
I hope you like my classes posts on your blog they loved commenting. With this being their first ever international blogging I keep their writing simple, just to tell you what they wished for. I have ,oeved reading your great writing. Looking to sharing more ideas.
Kind regards
Mrs Joyce
hello my name is hanzala hameed karachi pakistan 6-j
i wish i could be a pilot
and fly my plane higher and higher
over the mountains plains and seas
my plane would go faster and faster
i wish i could conquer this world
and move around sooner and sooner
i know i should work hard
to achieve the goal quicker and quicker
I wish I could have a magical lamp
and do many many many things for poor people .
Fatima Ayaz
V-A
B.S.S
PAKISTAN,Karachi
WHY EMILY WHY DO WANT THAT?
HELLO CARA THAT'S WHAT I ALSO WISH.
Hello, my name is Taha Munawar and I'm from Class V-A
I wish I could have
-Lazer Visions
-The ability to become invisible
i wish i could have laser vision
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